I felt in the writing mood so I wrote a small poem from the perspective of a secret crush. Here it is. (I did not editing whatsoever so it's really bad
As soon as I saw
I thought of a flaw
You weren't mine
Can't you take a sign?
My heart quickened
And I sickened
I realized my fantasies
Were other realities
I glanced and stared
But then realized you never cared,
About that boy in the corner who
His eyes immediately glue to you
I'm the guy in the sweatshirt, hidden
From you, because you are forbidden
My story is unwritten
May the plot thicken
As I listen to your soft voice
As I am toss to the side
My stomach caves in
And my skin in filled with pins
As I realize you'll never be mine....
A poem. Noncrab related
A poem. Noncrab related
From Emm
Happy Crabber since '16
2 PP's, CrabCakes and Odka (10g, 29g)
Soon to be owner of six adoptees and a 75g with all supplies!
Adoptees names! Bagel ( Big honkin Bagel aka BHB) Cece,Ebony,Mitzi,Rocco and Gwin
Happy Crabber since '16
2 PP's, CrabCakes and Odka (10g, 29g)
Soon to be owner of six adoptees and a 75g with all supplies!
Adoptees names! Bagel ( Big honkin Bagel aka BHB) Cece,Ebony,Mitzi,Rocco and Gwin
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HeyItsEggs
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Re: A poem. Noncrab related
I LOVE IT!
I am guessing when you talk in the perspective of the boy you're talking as the crush?
I am guessing when you talk in the perspective of the boy you're talking as the crush?
Sophia aka "Eggs"
Four PPs, Rio, Rolo, Curlz and Malibu in a 40 gallon
May they rest in peace- Mango- 1/13/17 and Stefanio- 1/10/17
Four PPs, Rio, Rolo, Curlz and Malibu in a 40 gallon
May they rest in peace- Mango- 1/13/17 and Stefanio- 1/10/17
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GotButterflies
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Re: A poem. Noncrab related
Good job Emm
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